dental school admission

Write a believable admission essay as to why I would I pursue this dental career what made me choose this path no cliches make a story believable use a girls point of view how my Pakistani culture use to restrict me from any motivation from family. Restricted from opportunity’s to build myself. I didn’t have the opportunity to experience through out my academic life like different clubs and after school programs my parents believed grades are enough you don’t need anything else to prove u you’re a girl it’s not good to stay out be home dental school show the love I have for hands on projects, art skills and patient care dental school will help me build on my skills that will help me prepare for future career